Cavenerd20
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I've decided to remove the parts that hint at Philip being a brony. It just didn't add anything, and I decided I was being lazy. So no more Brony Philip.
Don't read Ch. 2 yet, I'm still editing that one.
Edit: Still editing all of them, really.
Don't read Ch. 2 yet, I'm still editing that one.
Edit: Still editing all of them, really.
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New Beginning (?)
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I'm thinking of redoing the beginning, having Philip be less personable at first. Essentially, he doesn't talk until after he remembers about Luna, just sits there petting Flutters while he thinks.
What do my readers think about this? If I'm going to show this to you, I want you to enjoy it.
Just comment on this journal to tell me what you think. Also, if you want me to start posting again, get each chapter enough faves and I will. I won't say how many it will take; you'll know you've reached the number when I post the next chapter.
Also, comment on my story pages; I need feedback, or I won't know if I'm doing well.
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No more posts until further notice
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No one's going to read this but me, but I felt like writing something here in case I'm wrong.
I won't post any more chapters, because no one is reading them. The only comment I've gotten from someone other than me was flagged as spam automatically (I think). So I won't post anything else. I won't stop writing, because I'm enjoying it. I just won't actually post anything. It gives me more freedom to change things around a bit with the story, which I may do with the posted chapters.
So don't read the chapters that are out right now; I'm probably making minute changes to them. If anyone reads this and wants more chapters, just comment. If I'm wrong and someone is reading my story (I can't imagine how they found it if so), then I will post more.
Until further notice, however, this story is on hold.
Cavenerd20, signing out.
I won't post any more chapters, because no one is reading them. The only comment I've gotten from someone other than me was flagged as spam automatically (I think). So I won't post anything else. I won't stop writing, because I'm enjoying it. I just won't actually post anything. It gives me more freedom to change things around a bit with the story, which I may do with the posted chapters.
So don't read the chapters that are out right now; I'm probably making minute changes to them. If anyone reads this and wants more chapters, just comment. If I'm wrong and someone is reading my story (I can't imagine how they found it if so), then I will post more.
Until further notice, however, this story is on hold.
Cavenerd20, signing out.
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